Thursday, December 18, 2008

Feedback for Practical

Excellent transitions editing between computer room and hallway. Editing a very strong aspect to the sequence including use of match on action. Appropriate, effective and imaginative presentation of titles both in the diegetic world (on ipods etc.) and non-diegetic world. First shot of the sequence is excellent but the effectiveness of it is lost as the 'watcher is not seen for long enough before tracking forward to the monitor. A very strong piece of work. Well done.

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